Online Mission: Writing Wizards
Just for Students September 18th, 2009To complete the mission, please tell about at least three (3) things we have learned or reviewed this year that are helpful when writing, and tell why each is important. Please type your answers in complete sentences. Click the “Comment” link above, and type your answers into the box. I can hardly wait to see your responses!
Ms. Neely
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The Penguin link is NOT part of the mission-Extra Practice Only

September 20th, 2009 at 2:46 pm
I learned that every complete sentence has a subject and a predicate. Knowing this will help me to write sentences that make sense.
September 20th, 2009 at 2:51 pm
2) All sentences begin with a capital letter and end with a punctuation mark. This is important, because it shows where one sentence starts and another sentence begins.
September 20th, 2009 at 2:54 pm
3) When combining two complete sentences together, we can use words such as “and or but” to make compound sentences. This makes our writing flow.
September 20th, 2009 at 4:58 pm
1. I learned that every sentence has to begin with a capital letter.This helped me to understand where one sentece starts and another begins.
2. Every sentence has to end with proper punctuation. This helped to understand if the sentence is asking a question or making a statement.
3. A sentence should have a subject and a verb. I learned that this will help me to write complete sentences.
September 21st, 2009 at 5:03 pm
I learned to use correct punctuation at the end of a sentance.
I also learned to use capital letters at the beginning and not in the middle of a sentence.
September 21st, 2009 at 8:02 pm
Hello Mrs. Neely, I have learned 3 rules for writing.
1. We need start each sentence with a capital letter. and end with correct punctuation marks.
2. I learned how to use commas when writing compound sentences.
3. You should always end every sentence with correct punctuation marks.
September 22nd, 2009 at 5:55 pm
I have learned that a sentence begins with a capital letter and ends with a correct punctuation mark.
Proper nouns always begin with capital letters.
This will help me to write complete sentences that make sense.
September 23rd, 2009 at 6:53 pm
The story that I read was One Chili Pepper.
#1. The story took place in a small usualy quiet neighborhood in Mexico.
#2. The events in the story took place a follows:
The pots and pan wobbled on a stand.
A man bought a sombrero.
Amalia bought a chili pepper.
#4. The place that I would like to visit is Hawaii. I think that its a really beautiful place. My great uncle lives there. He said that food is great and the water is beautiful. My mom said that she plans to take me there one day.
September 28th, 2009 at 5:53 pm
The title of the story I read was Sarah’s Choice.
1.I think that she gets her way, but she eats healthy.
2. shocked -A suddend or violent blow or impact.
When the cars hit each other threre was a sudden shock.
Shocked- a sudden economic disturbance such as a rise in the price of a commodity.
There was a shock when The Great Depression hit.
3. In the beginning I would have included my mom in my plans. In the middle I would have insisted that we get permission before eating anything at a friend’s house. In the end we would have been baking a blueberry cake because I wouldn’t have eaten anything without permission.